Score: 10

"Nice!"

submission: Insatiable Appetite part 1

date: August 27, 2004

I love this piece. Even if you did just record it for Gel's entry (which also kicked ass), this has a really great tropical feel to it. This fit perfectly with the video. Has a great videogame-esque style to it that fits perfectly with Gel's style. Nice. Job.

Score: 6

"Not too bad."

submission: Dealey Plaza - Suckers

date: June 28, 2004

Not too bad, but a few things:

The singer needs to calm down, this song is supposed to be smooth during the "at first i was excited" blah blah part, there's no need to accent every other syllable.

Brass (trumpet player): Tune, and stop missing high notes that aren't even high. What is that note, like a G?

Less guitar, more singer. More brass. Less trombone, more trumpet.

Other than that it's not that bad.